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CW 131 — Less Is More: The Power of Concise Writing

Quarter: Winter
Instructor(s): Robert Hoekman Jr.
Duration: 5 weeks
Location: Online
Date(s): Feb 1—Mar 8
Class Recording Available: Yes
Class Meeting Day: Mondays
 
Class Meeting Time: 5:30—8:00 pm (PT)
Please Note: No class on February 15
Tuition: $430
   
Refund Deadline: Feb 3
 
Unit(s): 1
   
Enrollment Limit: 40
  
Status: Registration opens Nov 30, 8:30 am (PT)
 
Quarter: Winter
Day: Mondays
Duration: 5 weeks
Time: 5:30—8:00 pm (PT)
Date(s): Feb 1—Mar 8
Unit(s): 1
Location: Online
 
Tuition: $430
 
Refund Deadline: Feb 3
 
Instructor(s): Robert Hoekman Jr.
 
Enrollment Limit: 40
 
Recording Available: Yes
 
Status: Registration opens Nov 30, 8:30 am (PT)
 
Please Note: No class on February 15
 
 
From the sentence to the paragraph, the page, and beyond, whether email or essay, the start of a podcast, or the end of a novel, what makes writing more muscular, stylish, and distinct is a technician's sense of compression. While AI can trim and shorten, it is also likely to dull your voice without honing your content. In this course, we’ll take a practical path to pressurized prose. We’ll distinguish tightness from shortness, inference from explanation, and substance from surface. We’ll add heft to the sentence, cut and keep at the paragraph level, and tighten the tough scenes, sections, and arguments in between. Finally, we’ll look at when spaciousness can do what tightness cannot. At every stop, we'll perform skill-play exercises, learning how to write for density, implication, economy, syntax, structure, excision, and restraint. By the end of the course, you’ll know how to cinch airy pages into airtight prose that delights a reader’s eyes.

Students who took the instructor’s previous course, CW 25: "The Bleeding, Pounding Heart of Prose: The Art and Craft of the Sentence," may consider this a follow-up, although there are no prerequisites.

ROBERT HOEKMAN JR.
Author

Robert Hoekman Jr is a textwork artist and the author of nine professional and technical nonfiction books. His writing has appeared in publications such as Fast Company, Wired, and Maxim. His creative work has appeared in Five Minutes, Genrepunk, 50-Word Stories, Nanoism, Spelk, and elsewhere. Hoekman has served as an arts and culture journalist, magazine editor, and manuscript developer. He received an advanced certificate in creative writing from the University of Pennsylvania.